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September 27, 2012
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In the Scheme of Things by SuicideBySafetyPin In the Scheme of Things by SuicideBySafetyPin
apo ;)
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I feel as that if this piece should have a hardly any lighting within it. Also, those little orange and white circles? I think there should be the size of the one to the left of the pictures, and fewer in number. You should have spread them out a bit more to cover the background. I also think that golden strand should have connected with the circles to better establish a connection between the strand and the circle. In effect, this would make the submission true to its title "In the Scheme of Things".

It would give this submission a dark, foreboding feel. As if something was really about to go down. The lighting here just makes the picture seem bit joy-friendly. I'm not sure whether you wanted the title to fit the mood of the submission or was simply something you needed to write for a title. Please not that the previous sentence isn't scorn, but more of a question. I have read titles from time to time, but I wonder if you do name them based on themes? Just a curious question.

At any rate, yes this is good, but I think you could do better. Whatever I say, please don't let these writings bring you down. Always look on the bright-side of your artistry. Imagination is always the fundamental skill needed to create great art-work, so never question your creativity. Keep on fracting! :)
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LeaWiggins Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
Absolutely beguiling!  Seriously, I love this. It is so elegant.  Wow!
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SuicideBySafetyPin Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks ;)
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flutterby613 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i like it much much. most definitely
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SuicideBySafetyPin Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks ;)
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gimpZora Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
awesome work, really good :D
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SuicideBySafetyPin Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks ;)
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gimpZora Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
my pleasure :D
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Coolok Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
great!
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SuicideBySafetyPin Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks ;)
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pinkal09 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
Wonderful light, Light! I love the composition and how the things are growing out of or into the circle.
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