In the Scheme of Thingsby `SuicideBySafetyPin

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Submitted on: September 27, 2012
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Resolution: 4500×2812

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Critique by ~YouReadMyUserName Sep 27, 2012, 7:10:56 AM

I feel as that if this piece should have a hardly any lighting within it. Also, those little orange and white circles? I think there should be the size of the one to the left of the pictures, and fewer in number. You should have spread them out a bit more to cover the background. I also think that golden strand should have connected with the circles to better establish a connection between the strand and the circle. In effect, this would make the submission true to its title "In the Scheme of Things".

It would give this submission a dark, foreboding feel. As if something was really about to go down. The lighting here just makes the picture seem bit joy-friendly. I'm not sure whether you wanted the title to fit the mood of the submission or was simply something you needed to write for a title. Please not that the previous sentence isn't scorn, but more of a question. I have read titles from time to time, but I wonder if you do name them based on themes? Just a curious question.

At any rate, yes this is good, but I think you could do better. Whatever I say, please don't let these writings bring you down. Always look on the bright-side of your artistry. Imagination is always the fundamental skill needed to create great art-work, so never question your creativity. Keep on fracting!